Dear Hack,
First of all, I swear I read the whole story (2 episodes) from the very beginning to the very very end…
...and here’s my opinion:
When it comes to the story itself, I consider this one hell of a story…
The idea of schools for different martial skills (you know, Magicians, Swords men, Archers…etc) is really nice…
Of course you will have to excuse me for not saying “THIS IS YOUR BEST EVAR!” because these are almost the first words of your fiction that goes through my eyes to my brain to be analyzed. But I assure you that the story’s idea is truly good.
What can I say more? Well, I just want you to know that I am really looking forward to reading the 3 episode.
Keep up the good work
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