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    Thumbs down اغنيتين كتبتهم بالانجليزي((ارجو الرد))!!

    اهلين انا اليوم ابغى استشيركم في اغنيتين انا كتبتهم بس

    اعترف ان ما عندي موهبة ابدا frown bored tongue

    بس كذا هواية و اذا كانت بالانجليزي اعتقد ان راح يكون في كثييييييييييير اخطاء mad


    نبدأ
    اول اغنية

    over

    تاريخ الكتابة:augest 2005


    that one didnt work out
    what I wanted is you
    but you dont know whats all about
    its all about you
    i loved you from the first time
    my voice chime is saying that i cry


    cant get you out of my mind
    you were so kind smile
    i was thinking of you all the time


    Over,its over i cant do anything about it
    Rumor,its rumor that i love you now
    i wanted to tell you how much i loved you
    Over,its over i cant say anything about it
    Cover ,its a cover for my love to you
    i am telling you that is over


    i knew about you
    now i dont know about you anymore
    ther is nothing anymore
    cause its over now
    i have to tell you
    i am not thinking about you anymore


    cant get you out of my mind
    you were so kind smile
    i was thinking of you all the time



    Over,its over i cant do anything about it
    Rumor,its rumor that i love you now
    i wanted to tell you how much i loved you
    Over,its over i cant say anything about it
    Cover ,its a cover for my love to you
    i am telling you that is over


    i will never tell
    i will never spell
    your name never never
    even in hell
    i wont spell



    Over,its over i cant do anything about it
    Rumor,its rumor that i love you now
    i wanted to tell you how much i loved you
    Over,its over i cant say anything about it
    Cover ,its a cover for my love to you
    i am telling you that is over



    شرايكم redface


    song 2

    تاريخ الكتابة:augest 2005
    السبب: when someone came people start bullying and not being therselfs
    that makes me mad mad


    why

    smile and dont care about anything else
    let it go cause it doesnt make any sence
    why you are making things so complicated
    I ve been jaded
    of thinking about things that doesnt make any sence


    your becoming a somebody else
    your becoming a phoney``whats up
    is it true or false


    your raining on the unbelieveable way
    you got a lot to say
    people are not the way I thought they are
    what your doing is so geek
    you gotta be strong not a weak
    so back off you freak eek
    people are not the way i thought they are


    live your life any advice
    let it go without any lies
    dont tell anybody
    cause no body understands

    your becoming a somebody else
    your becoming a phoney``whats up
    is it true or false


    your raining on the unbelieveable way
    you got a lot to say
    people are not the way I thought they are
    what your doing is so geek
    you gotta be strong not a weak
    so back off you freak eek
    people are not the way i thought they are


    you tell me what you left
    all your burden over my head
    i keep thinking and wondring and asking why...why



    your raining on the unbelieveable way
    you got a lot to say
    people are not the way I thought they are
    what your doing is so geek
    you gotta be strong not a weak
    so back off you freak eek
    people are not the way i thought they are


    شرايكم اصلا ما عندي موهبة ولااا شي biggrin
    ارجو الرد


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    وواو

    اعترف :

    ما عندك موهبة بس نفس ما قلتي!!
    مجرد هواية

    شكرا على الاغاني
    vanessa-hudgens-at-2008-teen-choice-awards1

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    يسلمو اختي

    ننتضر جديدج

    وانا اقولج كلنا قلنا معندنا موهبه

    لكن حولي واجتهدي عشان اتصيرين مميزه

    تقبلي تحياتي

    اخويكم الحب كله؟
    اخر تعديل كان بواسطة » الحب كله؟ في يوم » 28-08-2005 عند الساعة » 22:26
    انا خايف(ليا طاح الجمل تكثر سكاكينه)
    وانا ماعادت ضلوعي تتحمل طعنة السكين

    الي محتاج شي انا موجود
    al7oob_5la@hotmail.com
    مع السلامه

  7. #6
    hey


    who told yea that u dont have the tallent



    every one have the tallent



    but each one of us



    keeps it deep deep inside



    to make it show up


    u have to go inside ur feelings



    when wrote ur songs


    u was concerned about the rhymes


    ok


    nice rhyming


    but


    u should care more and more about the idea


    about the meaning of the song



    try to remember my words next time u write something




    and believe me



    u do


    have

    the tallent

    with love

    Asmarino
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    Hi

    wo0ow you are creative eek
    you have the talent to create wonderful songs gooood

    I appreciate your work asian

    thank you so much dear gooood
    bye tongue
    49a0dbaba9fd19f057535cbe87a317c0
    knockedout

  9. #8
    Hi 4 all

    thank you dear melody_barckley

    nice words from you

    i really appreciate your hope

    keep going
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