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المواضيع: I’ve been betrayed

  1. #1

    I’ve been betrayed

    بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

    لا اريد ان اطول عليكم
    فالى القصيدة البسيطة

    I have heard you went so far
    Away from home, you drove your car
    And now you want me to get you back
    No way for that your chance so far

    I've called you for a love! A love!
    For something you have said its duff
    And now you want me to get you back
    I told you that is enough enough

    No need for that to get back again
    You harm me and the wound still pain
    And now you want me to get you back
    No way for that my eyes still raining

    I don’t care if you still cry
    I’ve cried before and you left me to die
    And now I don’t wanna see you again
    It just the truth not a lie

    I wondered ! what was going on?
    You turned your back and started to run
    Toward nowhere toward the sun
    I wondered! What was going on?

    Nothing anymore I can receive
    Nothing from you nothing to believe


    Nothing is nothing, don't keep in running
    You can’t get back if you still laughing

    Look at your people they have already gone
    They all got away from what you’ve done

    And now look at yourself, you don’t have a friend
    Nothing to receive nothing to be sent

    And now…. I don’t want you anymore anymore
    From your love I’ve had a cure

    Look at her sitting in a car
    Twinkle twinkle like a star

    I have giving her my heart
    She gave me her part

    So don’t ask me why
    Neither saying you’ll die
    No more of when and what
    No more of where and why

    I’ve got enough from you
    So listen to me, don’t do
    Don’t court me don’t coo
    Don’t even cry or bow

    So we come to this day
    Don’t even try to say
    “I love you” I’ve been betrayed
    So listen to what I’m gonna say

    This is my last cry
    I give my word no lie
    Rising my head to sky
    I came to say goodbye

    ارجو ان تنال اعجابكم
    بقلمي
    redface


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  3. #2
    يا إلهي يالجمال ما كتبت ...
    لكن نصيحتي لك تجنّب العاميّة ...
    كثيرون هم الذين يتخلّون عنّا
    ثم يكتشفون أنهم يحتاجون إلينا أكثر من حاجتنا لهم ...

    Dont let your wound aches
    just go ahead and forget it
    sleep at night
    and wake up in the morning
    and you wont see that wound anymore

    قصيدة جيدة نسبيًّا لكنها تفتقر إلى (الأليتيريشن ) أو إلى الجناس الابتدائي ...
    غير ذلك فهي ممتازة استمرّ ...
    You are always there you are everywhere but right now,I wish U where here

    أنا سورية دمّ و إحساس ...

  4. #3
    ما شاء الله قصيده رائعهgooood
    Keep up the good work


    a3faf843b2960351c6067de1ba5342c7

    .. Seize the day or die regretting the time you lost
    ! It's empty and cold without you here, too many people to ache over


    R.I.P. Jimmy "The Rev" Sullivan


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