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  1. #1

    ....She's falling ( بقلميــ)

    بســـم الله الرحمن الرحيـــــم

    She's starting to fall
    She's losing control
    I swear , She'd lose it all
    She can't show her feelings now
    She's gonna fall oneday, somehow

    This day comes so fast
    And she's not gonna last
    She's too weak to let her feelings be shown
    She'd let herself to be drown

    I'm watching her collapsing
    everyday .. she dies
    There's nothing but failure
    HELP ME" she cries"
    but she knows deep inside that noone would help her
    nothing! but lies

    She hopes to live a feeling , Yet to be felt
    a dream , Yet to be dreamt
    a future , Yet to be built

    She's losing her mind
    She just can't let go
    She keeps on looking behind
    She's moving so slow

    Everything around her seems to be false
    She wants to scream out loud
    but she's surrounded by hard walls
    Only one door can be found
    but that door is out of reach

    She can't find the salvation she's looking for
    and noone can help her anymore
    I just watch her through that door
    collecting the pieces of her own heart
    scattered on the floor

    She just wants her heart to renew
    She picks one piece up and lets go of two
    There's too much blood in there
    but her blood seems to be blue
    She can't find herway
    She can't solve the clue
    She's now sure that her dreams're
    never gonna come true

    And i can't blame her
    because that is the way i feel too

    And that's plain that everyone can see
    ?you may wonder who am i
    I'm everything she didn't want to be
    Because her heart is mine
    "And that girl "IS ME


    .................................................. ......


    عارفه انها طويلة بس اتمني تقرؤها و تعطوني رأيكم
    في انتظاركم ...


    a3faf843b2960351c6067de1ba5342c7

    .. Seize the day or die regretting the time you lost
    ! It's empty and cold without you here, too many people to ache over


    R.I.P. Jimmy "The Rev" Sullivan



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  3. #2
    احرااااااااااااااجnervous


    ما اعرف انجليزي...

    بس لو كتبتيها بالياباني اعرفrolleyes


    أكيد خاطرة جميلة..

    مادام انها طلعت من فتاة رقيقة..


    دمتي....سيستر.
    sigpic401385_19

  4. #3
    حلويات مشكله
    شكرا على مرورك حبيبتي و على كلامك الحلو زيك asian
    ولا يهمك راح اكتب ياباني بالكلمتيمن اللى اعرفهم هههههbiggrin
    داسكي دايووو

  5. #4
    What a magnificent poetry !
    is it really written by you ?

    I really liked your words
    You have a good future

    lol

    I asked my self
    does she mean her friend or what
    I read the last part of your poem to relize that you meant your selfgooood
    Do you study English language ?
    I mean in a university ?

    I like writing in English but I prefer writing in Arabic

    نصيـــــــحة لك أختي
    استخدمي الإنجليزية الفصحى ولا تكتبي gonna وهذه الكلمات العامّية ...
    ما تعجّبت منه أنّك تكتبين بقافية موزونة !
    نتطلّع لكتاباتك باللغة العربية ...
    لمن تقرئين ؟؟
    أنا أقرأ لجين أوستين وأنت ؟؟
    You are always there you are everywhere but right now,I wish U where here

    أنا سورية دمّ و إحساس ...

  6. #5
    I don't read elongated subjects but u made me read this and to tell the truth it was outstanding poem

    thank u biggrin

  7. #6
    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ماء المطر مشاهدة المشاركة
    What a magnificent poetry !
    is it really written by you ?


    Thanksssss alot
    yes i wrote it


    I really liked your words
    You have a good future

    Thank yousmile
    lol

    I asked my self
    does she mean her friend or what
    I read the last part of your poem to relize that you meant your selfgooood
    Do you study English language ?
    I mean in a university ?

    Actually i only study English at school
    next year i'm going to be a University student inshaa Allahrambo

    I like writing in English but I prefer writing in Arabic

    I like writing in Arabic too

    نصيـــــــحة لك أختي
    استخدمي الإنجليزية الفصحى ولا تكتبي gonna وهذه الكلمات العامّية ...
    ما تعجّبت منه أنّك تكتبين بقافية موزونة !
    نتطلّع لكتاباتك باللغة العربية ...

    kسأحاول العمل بنصيحتك اختي برغم ان الكلمات العاميه تساعد في اعطاء الوزن للقصيده احيانا لكنى سأحاول

    انشاء الله بنزل قصيده بالعربيه قريبا
    شكرا على نصيحتك اختي,,

    لمن تقرئين ؟؟
    أنا أقرأ لجين أوستين وأنت ؟؟
    بصراحه انا لا أقرأ لأحدrolleyes
    لكني احب قراءه القصص الانجليزيه عامه

    شكرا على مرورك الطيب اختي أسعدتيني كثيرا

  8. #7
    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Wolfey مشاهدة المشاركة
    I don't read elongated subjects but u made me read this and to tell the truth it was outstanding poem

    thank u biggrin

    Thank you so much
    it's my pleasure that you liked itsmile

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