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    My Poems

    Hi everyone I just wanted to share my poems with you. I'm
    hoping to get some feedback tongue

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    My first poem:

    I can't share love! It's an energy too essential to exhaust..

    neither can I be blamed, as she's a walking holocaust..

    She slaughters selfishly and chaotically leaving no survivors..

    she collects hearts, as heart is the only organ she devours..

    trust can be earned but love must be stolen..

    neither fed her hunger when I had deeply fallen

    ....

    My second poem:

    Death .. is it my fear or is it my longed for dream?

    Will I reincarnate as nothingness after my last scream?

    Does it take away my misery - my melancholy - my grief?

    Is it similar to life .. or is it a long lasting relief?

    Will my sins overpower my virtues? you might think

    Will I end up in hell.. or will I be in a garden full of pink?

    Death will suck the life out of your body with no sympathy

    A child, an old man and a mother .. What a symphony!

    Death will come in a time when it is least expected

    The graveyard is the place where you'll be neglected

    ......

    اخر تعديل كان بواسطة » Magnight في يوم » 05-06-2011 عند الساعة » 19:53

    Under the tough skin of mine .. lies the most sensitive soul of all time
    [IMG]http://i27.************/257evig.png[/IMG]


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    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Đєνiℓ $Ҝนlll مشاهدة المشاركة
    WoW GreaT , NiCe
    Thanks man gooood

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    Hi there smile
    I do care. cool

    your poems are nice, contain lots of feeling
    in the first one
    i liked this sentence the most:

    trust can be earned but love must be stolen..
    i liked the second poem more than the first one.... i think that the answer is yes i fear from death

    and no it's in my opinion the opposite of life....

    Will I end up in hell.. or will I be in a garden full of pink?

    Death will suck the life out of your body with no sympathy
    those sentences have touch my feeling and reached to my soul

    thanks for this lovely poem you wrote...wink


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    Life is a Game we all play, so... It's Always your choice

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    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Jeseka مشاهدة المشاركة

    Hi there smile
    I do care. cool

    your poems are nice, contain lots of feeling
    in the first one
    i liked this sentence the most:


    i liked the second poem more than the first one.... i think that the answer is yes i fear from death

    and no it's in my opinion the opposite of life....



    those sentences have touch my feeling and reached to my soul

    thanks for this lovely poem you wrote...wink

    YAY FINALLY !!
    I was just about to loose hope cheeky
    Thank you so much I'm glad you liked them asian
    I think the reason why people prefer the second one
    is because it talks about a sensitive matter which is
    death and how mysterious and terrifying it can be
    Thanks again

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    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Wolfey مشاهدة المشاركة
    Dude its really nice I like both of them
    Thank you so much I really appreciate it cheeky

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