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  1. #1

    Maybe

    Maybe she never meant to hurt me
    Maybe she never meant to make me cry
    I couldn't stand the pain inside
    Maybe she never want to let me die

    I wish I could see her face again
    I wish I could see her virgin smile
    I couldn't take away my pain

    Night is coming and there's nothing left to stay
    Nothing changes, everything has gone away
    No eternity, no hope for me with myself
    I close my eyes and every thing fade away

    did she meant to hurt me
    did she meant to make me cry
    did she meant to put that pain inside
    did she meant to let me die

    I wish I could see her face again
    I wish I could see her virgin smile
    I couldn't take away my pain

    Hold me in your arms for the last time
    don't let me die tonight



    King of Nothing


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  3. #2
    بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم
    السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته
    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة King-of-Nothing مشاهدة المشاركة
    Maybe she never meant to hurt me
    Maybe she never meant to make me cry
    I couldn't stand the pain inside
    Maybe she never want to let me die

    I wish I could see her face again
    I wish I could see her virgin smile
    I couldn't take away my pain

    Night is coming and there's nothing left to stay
    Nothing changes, everything has gone away
    No eternity, no hope for me with myself
    I close my eyes and every thing fade away

    did she meant to hurt me
    did she meant to make me cry
    did she meant to put that pain inside
    did she meant to let me die

    I wish I could see her face again
    I wish I could see her virgin smile
    I couldn't take away my pain

    Hold me in your arms for the last time
    don't let me die tonight



    King of Nothing
    قبل أن أتحدث عن هذه الأبيات أود أن أذكر أن هذه الأبيات هي عن شخص يبدو أنه فقد حبيبته أو أنها تركته و هو الآن يخبرنا بما يشعر به. طبعا سيكون النقد باللغة الإنجليزية نظرا للغة النص:

    From a syntactic point of view, this poem has nearly no mistakes except "I couldn't stand..." in the second line. It has to be "I cannot stand..." and the same applies to the section before the last since you talk about the present. In terms of spelling, there are two notes that I want to draw your attention to: first, You have to write the first letter of each line in capital. Second, in standard English (everything) is written as one word, so do not separate the two words because they are originally two. Arbitrariness is a remarkable property of language. Needless to say that you do not use punctuational marks whatsoever

    Now allow me to turn my attention to the denotations and connotations of this poem. The speaker here blames himself over what he (assumes) not over something he is sure of. It is true that she left him all alone by himself. Nevertheless, he says that she (may) never want to leave him alone. Consequently, she maybe forced to leave him due to some unknown reasons. Is it because of him? Well, I cannot jump to conclusions since the reason is not identified in the text itself. However, we might assume so because of his suspicion ; if it is someone's fault he will not suspend his beloved leave. Furthermore, in stanza three (more accurately, in section three) he states that his beloved is everything to him "everything has gone away" and that she is the meaning of eternity "No eternity, no hope for me with myself" . Thus, closing his eyes symbolizes his leaving of this world since there is no hope, nor eternity. The speaker concludes with a request from his beloved to hold him in her arms and said "the last time" in order to threaten her. So, is she going to respond? who knows



    I do appreciate your writing
    May Allah be with you

    وفق الله الجميع لكل خير
    و إذا سألك عبادي عني فإني قريب أجيب دعوة الداع إذا دعان فليستجيبوا لي و ليؤمنوا بي لعلهم يرشدون

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  4. #3
    أشكرك يا وهم على على مرورك ...
    smile وأشكر احساسك وسماع صداي ...
    By the way she never responds

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