.:. ~BRoKeN HeaRT~ .:.

[XphinixX]

hey everyone
how r u all
this is my 1st attempt to wright a poem (or what look like a poem )
i hope i did it right





surrounded by pain surrounded by tears
its saturday night , all alone only ur voice i hear

how can i survive this day without ur sight
how will i sleep the night when will i see the light

thoughts all around me ,dont know what to do
its sunday mornin' ,the day with my plan i'll go through

to tell her how i feel ,that she to my heart is near
but what if
what if

she doesnt love me back that's what i fear
she reject me and sink my eyes with tears

thoughts all around me,dont know what to do
its sunday evening,time was going fast till i found you

looking to your eyes and every second goes like a day
standing alone 'nd waiting. thats the chance for it i did pray

going towards u thinking what to say
now nothing between us but thin air
i told her that my heart with u i'll share
fore ever and never for you i'll care

then happened what i mostly feared
i felt my heart to pieces was teared
i felt so cold i felt so lost
how will i live without the one i loved the most

[تشاو موهيوك]

i know it is so hard to lose some one

going on is not easy that much

it takes some time to get used to that attitude

to refresh both your heart and your mind

to go right again

it is really tough and very painful

i can see

i can feel what you feel

nice attempt

no

it is great attempt

i recommend going on

you are a good writer

i hope it is not the last time you show your masterpieces here

with my best wishes

[dimetra sama]

it's Love by 1 side
it HURTS, it KILL

it make u feel
like an angel with
BROKEN wings
like COLD sun
losted it's heats

n what can I say !!

m so totched
m feelin so crashed

I can't stand hearin
sad love stories
I can't fight LOVE with all it's pain !!

U just gotta be strong
u gotta forget n go on..

cause life dosen't wait
it's like a train

gotta catch before it's gone FOREVER n EVER

peace

[XphinixX]

i know it is so hard to lose some one

going on is not easy that much

it takes some time to get used to that attitude

to refresh both your heart and your mind

to go right again

it is really tough and very painful

i can see

i can feel what you feel

nice attempt

no

it is great attempt

i recommend going on

you are a good writer

i hope it is not the last time you show your masterpieces here

with my best wishes

hey
thx alot 4 ur kind words i really appreciate it
did u realy like it ^^ ..yah i'll try to do more of these
thx again 4 being here

[XphinixX]

it's Love by 1 side
it HURTS, it KILL

it make u feel
like an angel with
BROKEN wings
like COLD sun
losted it's heats

peace

hey dimetra
beautiful words ..yah it really does hurts when someone dont appreciate what u r willing to give him

n what can I say !!

m so totched
m feelin so crashed

I can't stand hearin
sad love stories
I can't fight LOVE with all it's pain !!

U just gotta be strong
u gotta forget n go on..

cause life dosen't wait
it's like a train

gotta catch before it's gone FOREVER n EVER

i really apreciate ur attemt to left my spirit
but i say ..time will heal everything
thx again 4 passing in my topic 'nd 4 the wonderfull replay

[Dance of Love]

regularly sad ,, still sadder things do happen in this disgusting world


I enjoyed the rhyme though








keep it up



good luck , always




في حفظ الله

[XphinixX]

regularly sad ,, still sadder things do happen in this disgusting world


I enjoyed the rhyme though








keep it up



good luck , always




في حفظ الله

hey ..glad u liked it
thx 4 stopping by
best wishes

[b4 i die]

damn man
i lyk wotch u rote
keep it up
its more dan amazin
i c dat ur meanin every meanin ov da word
actualli u got ma mind
but lsn dnt b regret much
cuz wotch gone neva b back specialli if she chose it
so jus try 2 gt used 2 live widd urself
ME MYSELF AND I
alwaz put it in ur mind
am nt selfish but am jus realistic........
thx 4 hearin me
Alaa

[XphinixX]

damn man
i lyk wotch u rote
keep it up
its more dan amazin
i c dat ur meanin every meanin ov da word
actualli u got ma mind
but lsn dnt b regret much
cuz wotch gone neva b back specialli if she chose it
so jus try 2 gt used 2 live widd urself
ME MYSELF AND I
alwaz put it in ur mind
am nt selfish but am jus realistic........
thx 4 hearin me
Alaa

thx alot 4 trying to cheer me up
and u r absolutely right ,i just gatta get used to this
time is the best healer
thats what i always say ^^
thx again 4 being here

[Silent Melody]

hi........^-^
I enjoyed what you wrote

Its realy hard....to be in this situation

we try not to care
not spending our life wishing if they were here

crying on the echo of there voice

but you cannt help your self
because you love them

they took their place in our heart
but we dont have ours in their heart

yes my heart is broken too

but we cannt hate them


thanks for your words
please.....go on