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    ~ stay with mE ~ ..............................

    I Don't know from where to start ..
    I'm breathing So hard
    ... Why ALL this happen to mE
    no one Can see the suffer inside mE
    ... uhmmmmm

    I Loved you ..
    I never wanted anything like the way that I wanted you ..
    Miss talking with you ..

    I wanna touch your warm hand
    Please don't tell mE this is the end

    I wanna hear your voice ..
    belive me we can be together again
    there's must be another choice..

    I can't hold it Alone ..
    I can't live without my heart
    it's hard of stone

    you're part of me ..
    please stay with me
    اخر تعديل كان بواسطة » Darkness light في يوم » 28-01-2009 عند الساعة » 09:53
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    SUN Rises Smile on mY Face..TryinG tO preTend BuT it's Fake


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    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Darkness light مشاهدة المشاركة
    I Don't know from where to start ..

    I'm breathing So hard
    ... Why ALL this happen to mE
    no one Can see the suffer inside mE
    ... uhmmmmm


    I Loved you ..
    I never wanted anything like the way that I wanted you ..
    Miss talking with you ..


    I wanna touch your warm hand
    Please don't tell mE this is the end


    I wanna hear your voice ..
    belive me we can be together again
    there's must be another choice..


    I can't hold it Alone ..
    I can't live without my heart
    it's hard of stone


    you're part of me ..
    please stay with me
    woOw...it's so damn cool

    you wrote with full emotion

    iliked it...but you have some things wrong in it

    you've got to arrange it by the last word for 2 or 4

    not for 1 deffrent and 1

    any way

    keep going it'll be better next time.. gooood

    cy

  4. #3
    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ѕςяєам مشاهدة المشاركة
    woOw...it's so damn cool

    you wrote with full emotion

    iliked it...but you have some things wrong in it

    you've got to arrange it by the last word for 2 or 4

    not for 1 deffrent and 1

    any way

    keep going it'll be better next time.. gooood

    cy
    ^^" .. ThnxX ma sis ..
    actually I didn't get your point @_@ ...
    I know I'm bad in spelling nervous

    anyway ^^ thnX Alot ma friend ...
    and you know what ..I'v written these words befor few minutes
    uhmm cuz that what am feeling right now ...

    thnxX Again

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    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Darkness light مشاهدة المشاركة

    ^^" .. ThnxX ma sis ..
    actually I didn't get your point @_@ ...
    I know I'm bad in spelling nervous


    anyway ^^ thnX Alot ma friend ...
    and you know what ..I'v written these words befor few minutes
    uhmm cuz that what am feeling right now ...


    thnxX Again
    welcome dude..

    what i mean is

    for ex:

    I wanna hear your voice ..
    belive me we can be together again
    there's must be another choice..


    you'ed better make it like this

    I wanna hear your voice
    Choice
    -
    Noise
    boyz

    Or

    belive me we can be 2gether again
    rain
    -
    pain
    sane

    see...?

    any way

    thanx again

    peace


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    Nice I really like it
    from up 2 down
    keep up with your workin and you difenetly
    well be a English poeter


    see ya

    TNX for it
    goooodgooood
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  9. #8
    Thanx
    It is really good
    keep it up
    اللهم ارحمنا برحمتك واسكنا فسيح جناتك
    فريق الطلبات

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    heeeyz

    woOoW I liked it so much .. az rly im facing the same .. i mean wat u feelin' .. cuz i felt u from the wordz and I get your point ..

    I rly liked the wordz and everythin it waz awsome one .. keep writing ..

    good luck .. we wanna see more .. from your writingz ..

    bbeyz ..
    ffb4d774003baff0407dc02c61057ed0

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