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  1. #1

    أبي رايكم شعر بالإنجليزي

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    You the one

    For the one who love me
    I will present my heart
    For the one who help me
    I will inflate him in my heart
    For the one who protect me
    I will preach him
    When I wake up one day
    Before I open my eyes
    When I am recline on bed
    I felt emptiness in my heart
    Then I hug my pillow
    And felt that I should cry
    That is the feel of lonely in my depth
    Suddenly I observe that I am lonely
    That burn up my cheek with tears
    I hug my tidy and shout with many promises
    I will never be lonely
    I will never be neediness
    I will never be a helpless
    I heat my inanity
    For the one who love me
    I will present my heart
    Some time I wonder why I am exist here
    What is my indigence?
    Why I am here
    What is the purpose of my entity?
    Why I am life
    When the sun wake up after long night
    And it embraces the sky with its happy mixed with trust
    When it shine beyond clouds
    The light touch my face
    Like it moderate me
    It tell me that someone is here
    To support me and stop my cry
    He know the reason of my exist
    Suddenly I remind that
    I have never been lonely
    I have never been neediness
    I have never been helpless
    I realize you are always have been there
    On my side when people here or are gone
    You never leave me but maybe I forget in sometime or someway
    You always around me
    Surrounded me with your kindness
    Protect me from my falls or fouls
    Never let me to my desperation or confuse
    Never left my hand
    Never forget me in joy or gloom
    You have always been there for me
    You are the one who
    winkSave me from my misery
    You are the one who hold me when I cry
    Along the night you bring the haven to my soul
    You are the one who create peace full to my heart
    You bring the balance to my mind
    Every time you helping although I don't deserve you
    You are the one who save me from my darkness side
    You always forgive me even I don't merit
    So what did I did to earn you for all my life
    I am the last one demand you
    You are full of goodness
    Munificence and gentleness
    You are the name of greatness and lightness
    You gave the world grandness its mean
    You concede the dignity, support, repute and solemnity
    To the person who hold you
    You are my lord
    My doyen, My head, My heart, My suzerain
    My majesty, My bosom, My king, My love
    My God, My God, My God





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    ناطرين ردودكم و المشاركات و الآراء
    هذا أول موضوع حقي
    please help me
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  3. #2
    جميل..

    مع اني ليس لي علاقة بالنقد .. وفقط من باب التذوق ..



    الكتابة وصفية وتقريرية للمشاعر والحركات .. very descriptive لذلك لم أشعر بالنص


    اتمنى ان لا اكون ازعجتك ..


    واتنمنى لك كل النجاح مع مزيد من العطاء ،، وربنا يوفقك


    تحياتي smile

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  4. #3
    سلام و إحترام و تقدير و تحية قلبية ...


    i really did not know wht you are talking about
    until i finshed finished reading

    there's a lot of mistakes
    like
    Why I am life
    Why I am a live = لماذا انا حية
    إلا إن كنتي تقصدين , لماذا انا حياة

    But In general
    It's Nice

    Keep It Up


    كان معكم
    SmBokE
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    attachmentالرِجَالْ الحُكَمَاءْ قَالُوا ... اِبْحَثْ عَنْ طَرِيقْ فَجَرْ النُورْ
    الرِياحْ سَتَعْصِفْ بِوجْهَكْ بَينَمَا السِنِينْ تَمْضِي بِلَمْحْ البَصَر
    اَصَغِي للصَوتْ العَمِيقْ بِدَاخِلْ رُوحَكْ ... إنَه نِدَاءْ قَلْبُكْ
    اَغَلِقْ عَينَاكْ وثِقْ بِذَاتَكْ وسَتَجِدْ طَرِيقْ الخُرُوجْ مِنْ الظَلاَمْattachment
    attachment
    مُجَرّدْ فَتَىْ أَحْمَقْ يَتَفَوَهْ بِالهُرَاءْ بَيْنَهُمْ
    حَقّاً إنَ فِي هَذِه السَفِينَةْ لَشَئٌ مُبْهِجْ

  5. #4
    انا احيكي على هذا الكلم الجميل

    بس عندك اخطاء في بعض الكلمات

    انا عشة جوا هذه الكلمات في حياتي

    [[but the one who i love she is died]

    Thanks alot

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