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  1. #1

    °~*¤§( The Empty City : The Last Smile )§¤*~°



    °ˆ~*¤®§(*§ The Empty City §*)§®¤*~ˆ°





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    MeL A OdY


    Once Again, I'm with her

    ...I'm happy

    Becouse I'm with my one and only

    We are together

    In our little world

    A world of dreamful lullaby

    We are happy

    Becouse I love her as she does

    ...Even

    Even I'm not human

    Even I can't become a human

    She loves me

    She loves me becouse she is an angel

    She isn't human too

    She doesn't care about being a human

    I'm her, she is me

    ...We are one

    We are happy

    Even if that's just an imagination

    We keep our smile here, inside our hearts

    Becouse she's with me, I'm too

    Together, as warm as we can

    ...But
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    2


    MeL A OdY


    ...But, why

    ...Why

    Why am I supposed to smile

    ...Why I am Supposed to that while

    ...While she is

    ...No, there's no more

    There's no more happiness

    There's no more smiles

    I won't lough again

    ...Becouse, Today

    She went away

    She will not be here anymore

    She will not be with me

    ...She

    She died

    ...I can't understand how

    ...But

    She died

    Even angels may die

    Even my one and only may die

    So...Why am I here

    She isn't in that world anymore

    For what will I stay here

    How can I smile without her

    How can I be happy

    ...I, I won't

    I don't need to smile while she's not here

    I won't smile, I won't stay

    She isn't here anymore

    I can't understand

    I can't

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    3


    MeL A OdY


    ...I know it very well now

    I know why

    The answer within me, as the memories

    I know why that world won't allow me to be happy

    ...Even after I found my one and only

    That world took her away from me

    It doesn't want me to be happy

    ...And

    It did it's wish

    ...I won't be happy anymore

    Just as that world wishs

    I don't hate that world

    I can feel why did it do so

    Maybe it's unfair

    But it's essential

    At the end that's not her world

    It's not mine too

    It's humans world

    We're here becouse we're weak, and...

    Becouse that world need more angels

    There're already too many strong people

    ...Now, angels are requested

    To reach the equality

    But even that, I was happy

    Even when I know I was happy

    Becouse I was with her

    ...But now

    I'm not happy anymore

    I won't be happy again

    That what's unfair about that world

    It didn't let me stay with her forever

    Becouse I was happy

    And...

    Angels shall not be happy

    That what's unfair

    ...That's it

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    4


    MeL A OdY


    It's...It's about year now

    Yes it is

    I can't remember well

    ...But I know

    I know I'm missing something

    ...Is it

    No, it isn't

    So what is it

    I don't know

    Shall we try again

    ...Shall we

    ...We

    ...Who

    Who are you

    Who am I too

    Why are you inside of me

    ...Why

    I'm you

    The other you

    I & you still remember

    I & you still know her

    ...

    ...What was it

    It's an angel, can you remember

    ...I

    ...I'm

    I'm afraid

    I remembered

    ...You remembered

    ...Remembered

    A smile

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    5


    MeL A OdY


    It's very Difficult to feel

    It's very Difficult to smile

    ...It's very Difficult to live

    Without her, everything is a mirage

    I'm unfounded again

    I'm inside the empty city

    ...Even if I move to another town

    I'll just lose her again & again

    The empty city is the whole world

    There's no more cities

    It's the only city

    ...And now

    "Everybody with "that

    Everybody but me

    "Becouse I lost my "that

    I can't find another one

    I don't want

    She was the only one for me

    I can't love any "that" but her

    She was my happy dream

    And everybody has only one happy dream

    ...Should I

    Should I go on another journey

    "No, I'm not going to walk on a road waiting for another "that

    "I'm going to look for my "that

    Even she's dead

    Even she isn't here anymore

    There shall be a town where dead "that" go to

    ...I'll try to find that town

    "Trying to find my "that

    Becouse "that" cannot die

    That" always here, somewhere around"

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    6


    MeL A OdY


    ...Today, I know what am I

    ...Today, I know why am I sad

    I know that now

    I know I'm no one

    I'm no one

    I'm just an imagine

    I couldn't find her, I couldn't find me

    I couldn't find anyone

    Now, I'm alone

    Once again...I'm alone

    Even the other me doesn't talk to me anymore

    ...Why

    Why am I hated

    ...Why

    But who am I asking

    Who...No one with me

    No one at all

    What shall I do now

    I couldn't find her

    So why am I here

    "Die"

    Die ?...Can I die

    "Die, No one needs you"

    ...I

    I...know that, I'm unneeded

    ...But

    I...want to be here

    ! Want

    "Die Die Die"

    ...I

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    7


    MeL A OdY


    The sun didn't rise yet

    But I'm going now

    The sea is so dark and so cold

    But that's the time

    There's no lights, no hope

    No one can see me

    No one care

    I'm going now

    ...I'm going

    The sea's angry

    The sea wants me

    ...Shall I really do that, Shall I

    "Yes you shall, come inside me"

    But I'm...I'm afraid

    I'm so afraid

    "...Why"

    I...Don't know

    Anyway...I'm alone

    No one care about me

    ...I'm alone, right

    So I don't have to be afraid

    I won't lose anything

    I won't

    ...Right ?...Right

    I'm not crying

    I'm not crying here, I'm not weak

    I don't need them too

    ...I don't

    I'm not crying

    "Come to me, I'll protect you"

    Yes, Inside your pain I can hide my tears

    Inside your darkness I can fade away from me

    I'll be safe, No one can see me there

    No one can hurt me

    ...No one

    I'm going now

    I'm falling inside your darkness

    It's so so cold, But I'll hold on

    I'll keep going

    I won't die

    I'll just leave that world

    I'll be safe

    I'll

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    8


    MeL A OdY


    Sun rising

    Sea calming down

    Air moving slowly

    Doll on the beach

    Small litter around it's neck

    Unreadable words on it

    There's only one readable sentence

    "For you my dear, When you back"

  10. #9
    ينفع أتــكلم عربـــي >>
    السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركــاته ,,

    أخي الكريم فار كراي .. كيف الحال..؟

    أتمنى أن تكون دائم الذكر بالله ^__^

    موضوعك لازال قيد التقييم لأني لم أقرأه كلــه .. قرأت الجزء الأول فقط ..

    وشدني للمتابــعــة ^__^! .. أعجبني كثيراً ..

    ويبدو أنك تعبت في إعداده كثيراً gooood ولكني لا أجد أحدا من الأعضاء مقدراً ذلك ermm

    أقدر جهودك في إعداد الموضوع بأبهى حــلة .. وأشكرك كثيراً ..

    الموضوع رومنسي نار .. وعذاب باين عليه ..


    الله يوفقك يا رب

  11. #10
    a great topic !!!!!

    i didnt read it all but it seems "to7fa" !!!!!


    thank you !!

  12. #11
    slam 3laicom..

    wOoOoOoOoOoOoweek eek

    that's soooooooo cooool

    i read it all & i liked it very muchasian asian

    thanks alot


    my best wishesgooood
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  13. #12
    Alsalam 3laikom wa alra7ma

    as they say

    your topic is vrey great

    Ilike it very much

    Go on

    7aiakm

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  14. #13
    السلام عليكم والرحمه
    الصراحه شي جميل
    ما لحقت اقراه كله
    ع العموم ربي يعافيج

    وتسلمين ع الموضوع المميز



    تقبلي مروري

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    .[. إن لم تزد شيئا على هذي الحياة....فتأكد إنك " أنت "حاجه زايده .].

  15. #14
    لي عودة ..

    موضوع اكثر من رائع

    لي عوده
    رسالة الى ابي الراحل

    لان طالت بنا الغربة وحاالت دون لقيانا ..

    وعاد الطير للغصن ..يغني النصر جلانا ..

    اعود اليك في زمن شغف ابث القبر تحنانا ..

    انثر فوق مثواك دموع الشوق ريحانا ..

    ياحلمي الموعود قد عدت فلاترحل

    ولاتجرح بحد الوجد وجداني ..وجداني

  16. #15
    Thnx 4 The Gr8 Topic ^__^

    It's So Coool !!gooood

    I really liked it so much asian

    Keep It Up ..rolleyes

    Take Care ,,,
    اخر تعديل كان بواسطة » SwEeT_GAL2009 في يوم » 16-04-2007 عند الساعة » 18:46

  17. #16
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    Why !!!

    Why when we love some body very much…..

    Go away…

    "Go"

    Far ..

    Far…

    May back or not..

    \
    \
    Why he doesn’t think about us !!!

    About the pain….

    That we drink it every day….

    \
    No one care…

    No one say ..any things to make us

    Happy…

    Relax..

    \\

    No one take our hand

    To fly …

    Fly…

    Like an angel..

    \\


    لي عوده ان شاء الله
    ...

    سراب
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  18. #17

    غمزه

    FAR...CRY
    Helllo , how r u ?
    hope u fine? gooood
    your subject
    is

    wooooow

    really

    i read it and i like it so much
    but why u stop smiling


    Thanks allot 4 the amazing subject

    ^_^
    اخر تعديل كان بواسطة » sola في يوم » 17-04-2007 عند الساعة » 17:13
    عفواً .. اذا كان لديكم اي استفسار خاص بقسم التوون بشكل عام والمانجا توون بشكل خاص برجاء وضعه
    هنـا وسيتم تجاهل اي رسائل من هذا النوع

  19. #18
    خراط


    و عليكم السلام أخي, الحمد لله بأفضل حال...

    بإذن الله أنت أيضاً كذلك

    موضوعك لازال قيد التقييم لأني لم أقرأه كلــه .. قرأت الجزء الأول فقط ..

    وشدني للمتابــعــة ^__^! .. أعجبني كثيراً
    ما دمت بدأت بالقراءة فـ بالتأكيد ستستكملها

    عندما ابدأ بقراءته لا أستطيع التوقف إلا مع الكلمة الأخيرة ^^

    ويبدو أنك تعبت في إعداده كثيراً ولكني لا أجد أحدا من الأعضاء مقدراً ذلك

    أقدر جهودك في إعداد الموضوع بأبهى حــلة .. وأشكرك كثيراً ..
    الموضوع أعرف من البداية أنه غير جذاب جداً

    إن أخذت نظرة على الجزء الأول منه ستجدني أقول أني لم أضعه للردود و إنما هو لسبب خاص بشكل أكبر

    لكن ها هم وضعوا الكثير من حبرهم معي smile

    الموضوع رومنسي نار .. وعذاب باين عليه ..
    ربما ليس رومانسي, و لكني أترك كل شخص يفهمه بأسلوبه...

    أحب أن أرى هذا التنوع حول شيء واحد

    إذا تغير رأيك فيه بعد وصولك لنهايته, أخبرني

    دمت بخير أخي

  20. #19
    V@mPirE GiRL!


    ...Welcome

    My thank for you for your beaufitul opinion

    I wish you would continue it

    ^_^ I'm sure you will like it much more than now

  21. #20
    آي هايبر

    So, you're my first full-reading n_n

    Your words really makes my more happy I think

    ...I mean you're the first one to read it all

    So your opinion's after having a complete look

    ^^ Thanks for your presence here

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