السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته ...
كيفكم ؟ ان شاء الله تمام ^_^
اوكي , هذا اول قصه خرافيه اكتبها بقلمي ..
كتبتها 1st year @ college , 2nd semester <<<< والله ذكريات ههههههههه ^^
المهم , كلكم تعرفون Great Expectation ?? انا غيرت نهايتها طبعا الاستاذه طالبه كذا !!
just read it & tell me wat do u think , ok !!
''A Different Story Ending''
One day I woke up at 10:00 am. I was going to visited Magwitch at the hospital. The nurse said''sir, I m sorry but you can't visited him now because he's still sleeping''. But, I heard someone called my name ''Pip…'' it was him. ''Good morning, Mr.Magwitch, how are you today?'' I said.' I'm okay.'' he replied. And we were talking and talking suddenly, the doctor came and he wanted to talk to me about Mr.Magwitch's situation. ''Listen Pip, Magwitch will be fine, soon he will be able to go out of the hospital''. He said. I left so happy for him when I heard the good news. A few days later, Magwitch got out of the hospital. I went to Joe and Biddy's house. They welcomed me and they were happy to see me. However, we all sat down and were talking and laughing. ''I have an idea'' I said. ''What is it Pip? Come on tell us'' Biddy said. ''We will give a party for Magwitch'' I said. ''That’s will be a great party, after all he got out of the hospital and we are all happy for him' Joe said. We all agreed to have a party for Magwitch, and all the people, and friends of the village will help us to prepare for the party. It took us two days to prepare and we were so happy and excited. The next morning, I woke up to visit Magwitch at his home. But no one was there. The house was empty. Suddenly, I saw a piece of paper under the door I took it and read it:
I'm sorry that I had to go away from the village and from you, but you won't understand what happened when I was in the hospital. However, I want to thank you for everything that you had done for me. I love you my dear friend. Don't forget me and wish me luck.
Your best friend,
I couldn’t understand what was he doing and why he wanted to go away. I asked my self so many questions. '' Why and what is he hiding''. The bell ranged. '' Who is it?'' I said. It was my friend Joe. '' Come on in, how are you?'' '' I'm fine, thank you for asking'' he replied. We sat down and he asked me'' why?'' ''Why what?'' I said. '' Why did Magwitch run away suddenly?'' '' Is he hiding something?'' he began to asked me as I did. I told Joe that I had decided to look for Magwitch and I will ask him why and what happened?
One day, I heard that Magwitch went to England. I decided to go there and find him. When I arrived at 11:30 pm, I was so tired that I couldn’t travel through country to find Magwitch so I went to the hotel and got some sleep. I was dreaming about what happened lately and I couldn’t sleep well. The next day morning, I sat down and ate my breakfast. And I was thinking about Magwitch. Suddenly, I saw the newspaper I read it. It was saying that if someone can catch Magwitch we will pay for him a great deal of money. '' What?!'' I said shocked '' why does someone care about Magwitch that much?'' I asked my self surprising. However, I went out and decided to look for my friend before someone else does. It took me hours and hours to find him; I asked everyone about him but found no answer. A few minutes later I got tired and sat down next to the largest tree near the river. I was looking up to the sky and thinking, wondering what will happen next. Suddenly, I heard someone screamed asking for help. I went to find the voice and I saw two men wearing black suits, shoes and black glasses trying to take the young girl with them. ‘‘Stop!’’ I said. They turned at me and one of them said ‘’ who are you, that’s not your business? ‘’ Why you want the girl, has she done something wrong?’’ I said. ‘’ No, but we want her because she’s an important person, without her Magwitch won’t come to us, she’s his daughter” “you’re a stupid man why did you till him?” another man said. Then he turned to me with a gun with his hand trying to shoot me. I was screaming and screaming and suddenly I woke up and realized that all this was a dream.
بلييييييز لا احد يحفظ او ينقل اوكي ^^
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C YA ^^