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    Phoenix

    Hi all , i know been long time snice i put topics, well anyway

    this is a story i write now, it's new story called by Phoenix, hope you like it and enjoy it.

    here i go....

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    The Characters:-

    Taki Yami, 16 years old, 3rd year at high school, he's one of the rich families at japan, he's the only son in Yami family. he has, Taki is japanese guy and handsome.

    Tenshi Hoshi, 16 years old, Taki's best friend snice they were six years old, he's same classes with Taki.

    Hikaru, 14 years old teenager, her name given by Taki who called her that name snice she can't remeber who she is, and why or how she came to Tokyo, Hikaru process fire powers plus healing, she control her powers very well, Hikaru is so smart girl, she's same class with Taki and Tenshi.

    Mia Lockheart, 16 years old, the girl is bad girl annoy the new students, she the famous girl in school but no one really like her cause she's mean girl, she's same classes with Taki and Tenshi, Mia is american girl who live in Tokyo japan, when she was ten.

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    Phoenix

    by: Tara

    Introduction...


    The rain was prouing, black clouds covered the sky, thunder roared; lightinng flashes time to time, a red glow appeared in the sky, it looks like bird but then it changed to fire ball and hit north side of woods inside one of big villas parks, it made loud noise as soon as it hit the ground making a hole.

    16 years old Taki Yami , he was at his 3rd year at high school, he was walking, he looked at the sky with his green eyes, his blue/black hair got wet cause the rain and his school uniform; he loves to walk under rain, then Taki saw something falling from sky it looks like bird fist but then it changed into fire ball and then fall not far away from him, into woods, Taki ran there to see what is that thing that fell and made loud noise.

    Taki saw a huge hole on the ground, he walked slowly to the edge of the hole 'what if something jump out that hole. come Taki don't be silly.' Taki thought as then looked to see what inside that hole, then he saw, she was a girl, she looks around 14, she laid on her stomach, Taki could see the black leather coat, black half fingers gloves, black jeans trousers, black boots, the teenager girl has short red-orange hair reminiscent of fire.

    Taki jumped into the hole and went to check the girl, Taki klent next the girl and truned her around, he took the girl on his arms, the teenager opened her sliver blue eyes, she was freak out, she tried to run but she winced in pain.

    "it's ok, i will not hurt you." Taki said, the teenager girl looked into his green eyes before she past out, Taki looked at the girl then he stood up carrying her in his arms, he jumped off the hole and walked to the huge villa back to his family home, Taki called for the maid.

    "Mia.. Mia come fast." Taki yelled.

    A woman with brown hair and eyes ran fast "yes master." she said.

    "i need help, this girl need care, need to change her cloths, see if she has wounds, and need something to eat." Taki said, Mia nodded as she took the girl from Taki "yes Master." she said as she took the girl up stairs to the guest room, Mia took a good care of the girl, she then walked out the guest room, she walked to the stairs, she saw Taki walking out his bedroom "Mia, how is she?" he asked.

    "she's sleeping master, don't worry faster, she's not hurt, she's fine, a little pale." Mia said.

    "ok then."

    "i will go to work."

    With Mia went down stairs, Taki walked in the hall and stopped 'who is that girl and how she came here.' he shook his head then she turned around and walked back to his bedroom.

    Three days past, the teenager girl laid on bed, she began to stirring, she opened her eyes and rubbed them, she felt dizzy and a tired, she looked to see a maid there.

    Mia looked to see the teenager girl woke up, Mia went to the girl and lean to the girl "you awake, how are you feel?" she asked whispering to her.

    "I- i am fine." the girl coughed.

    Mia helped the girl to sit up, and then gave her a glass of water, the girl drank the water, then Mia took the glass and placed it on the nightstand next to the bed.

    The girl fell sleep again, Mia cover the girl then she looked at the clock on the wall, it was 6:00 am 'time to wake up master.' she thought.

    The girl laid down on bed "h-how i came here, what is this place?" she asked in low voice.

    "Mister Taki brought you her, you past out, this is Yami's house." the maid said "I am Mia." Mia looked to see the girl fight to keep away "you better rest." she added, the teenager nodded, she fell sleep,
    Mia stood up and leaved the guest room closing the door behind her without making any sounds.
    Tara The Sorceress

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    ...nice story...but you need to work on the language
    ...Looking forward for the next part
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