Some times I wonder who you are

**m.r** · 29-11-2006, 15:40

I wrote this in school and I just wanted for others to read it ... please write me back
I have some mistakes but that's fine I know that

Some times I wonder who you are

Just tell me before I lose my mind

Who the hell do you think you are?

Daring to challenge this fist of mine

I really wonder how strong you are
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Don't you think you went too far?

Trying to give me a piece of your mind

Using a trap like an old crap

Even a fly would notes this gape

Why do you even think that I'm blind?

Seeing through you won't be hard

Even by looking I can read your mind

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**m.r** · 29-11-2006, 15:42

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Being shallow is ironically fine

Even a naive like you can die

If you dare try my mind

I ashore you that this time

Death will approach you slowly and nice
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Don't you dare showing me your smile?

Because I don't like it when you try

It's fake...... but I really doubt my eyes

Maybe something lies inside

I used to think you it's a rotten heart

But now I'm not so shore its right

Maybe you got caught some how

By your own sins and lies

Either that or you suffered so hard

That you forgot how it ones was

To be loved as you grow up

I really think I worry too much

I guess I will only through a punch

Aiming to your heart won't be tough

**m.r** · 29-11-2006, 15:43

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Try to approach me one more time

You will just shorten your life span

Are you telling me it's all right?

Lying to your self won't really help

You just make a fool out of yourself

That my heart gets broken every time I look

**m.r** · 29-11-2006, 15:47

i hope you liked my writing
this is my first time here
i always stike with the cartoons
but this time i thougt i would try something diffrent

**m.r** · 29-11-2006, 15:51

I used to think you it's a rotten heart
that one is wrong
i ment to write

I used to think it's a rotten heart

**spring_prize** · 29-11-2006, 16:12

you areso cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that is very nice and good try.................

I wish you success in your school............... your writing is very good.......BUT......... you have alot of grammatical mistakes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Do not worry............ it is beautiful toooo!!!!!!!!!!!

with all my love and best wishes for you...............
your friend................
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