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    Tainted poem

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    Tainted

    With a few words, my heart is torn
    from my pain, only sorrow is born

    Finally, behind the lies, my life I can see
    dreams collapsed, there is no hope for me

    Words of love, tarnished - lie, all they burn
    once love - now gone, forever, ashes to turn

    All those lies, in front of my eye, now flashes
    what once were my love, now only remain in ashes

    Tainted ashes of love, only feed the seeds of lie
    blown in the wind, to seek a victim, a heart to die

    6e09123e4b

    by SorrowMan.

    6e09123e4b


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    my dear................. thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks alot for your trying............it is very beautiful.. and I am very glad to be the first reader of your writing.....plaese.....accept my reply in your new page.............your friend......
    moon tears

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    6e09123e4b

    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة spring_prize مشاهدة المشاركة
    my dear................. thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks alot for your trying............it is very beautiful.. and I am very glad to be the first reader of your writing.....plaese.....accept my reply in your new page.............your friend......
    moon tears

    6e09123e4b

    Thanx 4 the sweet comment, glaaad ya love it

    i'm really happy

    ur welcome my friend


    6e09123e4b

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    sometimes we need to cry..............sometimes we need to fly.............we need to go high and high.....BUT..........................everything goes worst...........and.........we cant deny !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    please accept my second comment.............. your sad friend................moon tears

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    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة spring_prize مشاهدة المشاركة
    sometimes we need to cry..............sometimes we need to fly.............we need to go high and high.....BUT..........................everything goes worst...........and.........we cant deny !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    please accept my second comment.............. your sad friend................moon tears

    ur very sweet, u have a sweet feeling

    ur right
    the pain take our life to the sweet hell & we can't deny


    ur more than welcome

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    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Blanc Jasmin مشاهدة المشاركة
    A wonderful poem
    It has astrong meaning
    Thanks so much

    thanx 4 the sweet comment

    glad u like it

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