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Hi bro
The Scenario poem is very beautiful but what i meant by the music of the verse and Music noodles sould be acorrding to the basics of the english poetry , take for example Shakespear poems Shall i compare Thee to a summer day
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimm'd;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest;
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this and this gives life to thee.
If you want to write a piece of poem in English,pay attention to this:
The line of the English poem constitutes of a meter.The meter constitutes of feet.
There are five kinds of feet:
1-iambic:It is an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable.
2-trocaic: It is a stressed syllable followed by an unstressed one.
3-dactylic: two unstressed syllables followed by a stressed one.
4-anapaestic:a stressed syllable followed by two unstressed ones.
5-spondaic:a stressed syllable followed by another stressed one.
If the line contains one foot,we call it "monometer"
two feet,we call it dimeter
three feet,we call it trimeter
four feet,we call it tetrameter
five feet,we call it pentameter
six feet,we call it hexameter
example:
Your force to break,blow,burn and make me new
"your" is unstressed,"force" is stressed "to is unstressed,"break","blow" and "burn" are stressed,and" is unstressed,"make" is stressed,"me" is unstressed,"new" is stressed.
If we consider this symbol * for unstressed and this symbol / for stressed,we get something like this:
/* /* // /* /*
So,we have four iambic and one spondaic which shows that the dominant foot is iambic.So,we call this meter"iambic pentameter".
P.S : If you find two unstressed syllables ** consider the foot iambic.
sorry to make is that long
Ahmed Jala
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