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المواضيع: without you

  1. #1

    without you

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    without you

    life is a train makes me travel from station to another and in every station i loose and gain

    except the happiness of being with you i didnt ask and claim


    without you in my life i dont have a nation i dont have even a name


    i walked at a road of loneliness it has no dirction and and i have no aim


    the time cant erase this un usuall pain


    you played of my heart like a game


    i hoped just once if you looked at my eyes which it crying like rain

    i infect of you your love is a stocking stain


    even if i tried to make you go but you always remain



    my heart doesnt have just the sorrow and wounds to contain


    i burned with eager like candle flame


    the truth and lies became the same


    but you told that every thing is end and now...


    im without you i lost in vain

    بقلم sky storm7
    Does Not Exsist
    sayat.me

    أللهم أنصــُر أخـــواننـا في ســوريـــا ومصر والعراق


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  3. #2
    you'r writer is good and your emotion feelings strong and enter my heart directly
    i love your poem
    but bay attintion to
    the spelling
    thanks and go on
    اخر تعديل كان بواسطة » Bareek Amal في يوم » 03-08-2012 عند الساعة » 00:03
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    لا اله الا الله محمد رسول الله

    tranquillity

  4. #3
    thank you

    اسعدني تواجدك ويشرفني تكوني اول شخص يرد

  5. #4
    P2Q2CH
    الصورة الرمزية الخاصة بـ Narcissa









    وسام الشعر و الخواطر وسام الشعر و الخواطر
    وسام فداك روحي وسام فداك روحي
    وسام الأنامل الفضية (3) وسام الأنامل الفضية (3)


    Peace be upon U ♥


    It's so nice to have English poems around

    Am glad to read yours

    I stopped by each line and stared at your lovely words

    and lived the whole figures

    it's really emotional

    I have enjoyed being here

    hope to find others members that Gonna follow your steps and write in english also ^^

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    am looking for your next thread

    Regards.



    Narcissa




  6. #5
    My friend..

    Whatever I say, It won't be enough..

    you're a great poet..

    I feel your lovely words which have the power of getting directly inside my heart..


    i walked at a road of loneliness it has no dirction and and i have no aim
    these words are great, but perhaps ( I walked through a road) will be better in my opinion..

    you played of my heart like a game
    you'd better say : played with my heart


    at my eyes which it crying like rain
    at my eyes which are crying.. I think this will be better..

    I ask you a pardon, for such many words..

    But I'm really happy with your poem..

    Go on..

    We are eager to read more for you^^
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    سلمت يمناك أندلسية على الطقم المبهر
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    فبئس الحكم يا هذا * على الأشلاء يأتينا !

    لنا الله ..


    رأيكم يشرفنى^^||سؤالكم^^

  7. #6
    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Narcissa مشاهدة المشاركة


    Peace be upon U ♥


    It's so nice to have English poems around

    Am glad to read yours

    I stopped by each line and stared at your lovely words

    and lived the whole figures

    it's really emotional

    I have enjoyed being here

    hope to find others members that Gonna follow your steps and write in english also ^^

    120126203803BFda

    am looking for your next thread

    Regards.



    Narcissa



    thanks alot you make me shy im glad for reading my poem

  8. #7
    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة orrora مشاهدة المشاركة
    My friend..

    Whatever I say, It won't be enough..

    you're a great poet..

    I feel your lovely words which have the power of getting directly inside my heart..




    these words are great, but perhaps ( I walked through a road) will be better in my opinion..



    you'd better say : played with my heart




    at my eyes which are crying.. I think this will be better..

    I ask you a pardon, for such many words..

    But I'm really happy with your poem..

    Go on..

    We are eager to read more for you^^
    thank you sis i respect your opinion

    thanks for passing

  9. #8
    wow what amazing topic

    i want to read every thing

    the girls wrote

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    تم إختراق حسابي على الفيس بوك فلستُ مسؤولاً عما يعرضُ فيه

  10. #9
    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كاسر الكلمات مشاهدة المشاركة
    wow what amazing topic

    i want to read every thing

    the girls wrote
    thanks alot im so happy you liked it

  11. #10
    hey girl
    your words were awoesome and full of pure emotion
    but i cant ignore that you're waiting for someone who treats ya like that
    go ahead and forget him forever
    let him know that you're strong without him
    even it was just a poem
    it made me angry
    stoppppppppppppp waiting and crying and wasting you're time ( ^^ this for the girl in the poem sweety

  12. #11
    إقتباس الرسالة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sama hrh مشاهدة المشاركة
    hey girl
    your words were awoesome and full of pure emotion
    but i cant ignore that you're waiting for someone who treats ya like that
    go ahead and forget him forever
    let him know that you're strong without him
    even it was just a poem
    it made me angry
    stoppppppppppppp waiting and crying and wasting you're time ( ^^ this for the girl in the poem sweety

    thanks for your opinion when i read your words i feel SATISFIEd but the girl in my poem not me imade it by my imagination and this girl her love crossed all limits so she cant be without the person that she loved but he left her

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