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    for my pian


    The day was absent
    Istopped I look at the moon
    On chest of the sky
    A question swallows up me
    he says : why
    The day was absent
    in the middle of the sky
    My tear dismounted
    He made me cry

    I ask a star?
    If only that she watches you
    as what that I watch you
    She feels that I see you

    But he replaced his fogs she fills his look
    O you miserable padlock
    separated my limitation .. liberated me


    Until when // the staying // a prophet // for my pian
    Until when
    the bewails Withered characters
    !!.. An old flute he plays them ..
    Between the herbs they were increasing from.. the thirs
    In pitch-dark night let me appear in her.. Like broken saddler
    He reports a stories of an old hut
    A nest of a wetted bird
    A frame A cobweb is on him
    He relates the story of the outsiders
    she made him cry
    The day was absent
    he stopped look at the moon
    اخر تعديل كان بواسطة » wizerd في يوم » 03-10-2005 عند الساعة » 10:03
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    But he replaced his fogs she fills his look
    O you miserable padlock
    separated my limitation .. liberated me

    أنا مو كتير شاطرة بالإنجليزي مشان هيك برد عليك بالعربي ^^

    خاطرتك أروع من رائعة .. و تستحق القرائة ..

    بس يا ريت تحاول بالعربي ^^

    تحياتي لك ... مجنونة الروك
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    gooood gooood gooood



    gooood




    Thank You




    [Shadow]أوراق الـــــــــــورد[/Shadow]
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    كلمات ولا اروع
    جداً مذهله وممتعه وتسلم gooood
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    Salaam,

    I guess that you did very well in writing such a poem. This poem manifests your great ability of depicting and picturing the scene. Moreover, it shows that we have a future poet who will furnish us sooner or later with a number of literary masterpieces.

    Personally, I am so impressed by your poem. I really like it, so please keep posting your poems here and never give up. I am so eager to read more and more for you.

    Please accept my best regards.

    Faithfully

    Mohammad the Young Man
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  8. #7
    hmm


    what should i say



    its beautiful

    u picked up words very nicely


    and u managed the rhymes very well

    its a beautiful poem


    am looking forward to read another poem for u


    best wishes


    Asmarino
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