عرض كامل الموضوع : شعر بالانجليزي
شمس غاربة
21-03-2008, 18:44
مرحبا...
اليوم انا كتبت شعر يمكن تقولون بالانجليزي. الكلمات تعاونت انا وصديقة عزيزة الي بكتابتها. ان شاء الله تنال اعجابكم
Moving on
I walking away,I have to go.
You're face is like the sun, i see it everywhere.
I am crying, i cant move on like this.
When the darkness arrives, i beg, beg god that you could stay by my side.
I am trying, trying to make anyone listen to me.
But the only thing i hear, is laughter from hell.
You're still there in my heart.
I try to move on but I can still see your face
I guess its worth to love you but,I won't say I'm in love with you
I just wanna move on,but I'm waiting for your words saying that you love me
ان شاء الله عجبكم الموضوع ..انتظر ردودكم
سلام و إحترام و تقدير و تحية قلبية ...
But the only thing i hear, is laughter from hell.
...^؛^...
عبارة جيدة ...
<><><>
كلمات بسيطة سريعة ... جميلة جدا
تقبلي مروري البسيط
كان معكم
SmBokE
its soooooooooooo good و هي الكلمات اهداء مني الك ...
................................
see me as if u never know
hold me so u cant let go
just believe in me...i will make u see
all the things that ur heart need 2 know
ur gana say i can give any thing but love
go on hurt me but dont leave me alone
wake me up and tell me whats going on.....i know ur leaving i know ur gone
واحلى سلام الك!!!
بصراحه اريد ان اضيف مشاركة اخرى لان اريد للموضوع ان يبقى في المقدمة ...
لان الشعر الانجليزي يساوي الشعر العربي بجماله ... وانا من كاتبات الشعر الاجنبي ... وبتمنى ان نصير مع بعض حتى انحث كل اللي بالمنتدى يدخلوا ويشاركوا...شكرا الك وحظ موفق !! ::جيد::
شمس غاربة
23-03-2008, 16:02
سلام و إحترام و تقدير و تحية قلبية ...
...^؛^...
عبارة جيدة ...
<><><>
كلمات بسيطة سريعة ... جميلة جدا
تقبلي مروري البسيط
كان معكم
SmBokE
شكرا شكرا شكرا ...انا فرحانه لانه شخص مثلك رد على موضوعي..
شمس غاربة
23-03-2008, 16:14
بصراحه اريد ان اضيف مشاركة اخرى لان اريد للموضوع ان يبقى في المقدمة ...
لان الشعر الانجليزي يساوي الشعر العربي بجماله ... وانا من كاتبات الشعر الاجنبي ... وبتمنى ان نصير مع بعض حتى انحث كل اللي بالمنتدى يدخلوا ويشاركوا...شكرا الك وحظ موفق !! ::جيد::
انا موافقة على هذا الموضوع ..وشكرا على الشعر ..كلمات مؤثرة :)
افل لوفين
23-03-2008, 16:29
وااو
خطيره ::سعادة::
D GENARATION X
23-03-2008, 16:36
bravoooooo
ماشاء..الله..عليك..حتى..أنا..أكتب..شعر..بالإنجليزي !!
kaleido star
23-03-2008, 17:14
يسلمووووووووووووو
شمس غاربة
23-03-2008, 19:23
وااو
خطيره ::سعادة::
شكرا على الرد على موضوعي ::سعادة::
شمس غاربة
23-03-2008, 19:24
bravoooooo
ماشاء..الله..عليك..حتى..أنا..أكتب..شعر..بالإنجليزي !!
كانت محاولة بسيطة من عندي..حلو الشعر الانجليزي ..انصحك تكمل ..
شكرا
شمس غاربة
23-03-2008, 19:25
يسلمووووووووووووو
الله يسلمك
انا عارف انوا ردي متاخير
بس الشعر مررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررره روعه
وانا انصح انك تكميلي
انا درسة سنتين في كندا حتى تعلمت
صح لسآآنك
:ضحكة:
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بصراحه ما فهمت شي
:مرتبك:
ننتظر جديدكـ العربي :p
Dance of Love
24-03-2008, 12:46
very lovely,,
i like the sun, darkness and the smile that shine
kinda like my way to write :)
I loved the realistic ending
coz You are a girl who knows what she's doing
keep it up and move on toward us
:)
we're happy to read for you
the best of luck
:)
أبو داحم20008
24-03-2008, 15:00
ميرسي على الموضوع
شمس غاربة
29-03-2008, 15:40
انا عارف انوا ردي متاخير
بس الشعر مررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررره روعه
وانا انصح انك تكميلي
انا درسة سنتين في كندا حتى تعلمت
شكرا على الرد ;) بس شنو درست؟
شمس غاربة
29-03-2008, 15:42
صح لسآآنك
:ضحكة:
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بصراحه ما فهمت شي
:مرتبك:
ننتظر جديدكـ العربي :p
مو مشكلة اذا مافهمت شي ::جيد:: شكرا على الرد
شمس غاربة
29-03-2008, 15:52
very lovely,,
i like the sun, darkness and the smile that shine
kinda like my way to write :)
I loved the realistic ending
coz You are a girl who knows what she's doing
keep it up and move on toward us
:)
we're happy to read for you
the best of luck
:)
thank you for your words girl..you are saying that i am a girl who knows what i she is doing ..but i dont think so..i used to be confuesed always..idont realy know who i am or what is my identity..i am from iraq but i left it from long time ago..
thank you for your words..
but the sun and darkness in same time...i did not understand how..
thanx :)
Dance of Love
29-03-2008, 17:42
:)
My Mom's from Iraq too and her origion is something else and she's got another passport and I feel I sometimes belong there too
however I'm not
But still I can find an identity,, that suites me which is to be a Muslim and Arabic
proud just for that
I know it's complicated I really know coz I always lived it this way
however
I hope you find your way too
what I meant in telling that you know what you're doing is that you know how to handle your feelings
which is difficult for some people to mangae
:)
nice to talk to you dear
welcome in here :)
أهوى المخاطر
29-03-2008, 18:24
شكرا على الشعر مرة حلووووووو
شمس غاربة
29-03-2008, 18:54
:)
My Mom's from Iraq too and her origion is something else and she's got another passport and I feel I sometimes belong there too
however I'm not
But still I can find an identity,, that suites me which is to be a Muslim and Arabic
proud just for that
I know it's complicated I really know coz I always lived it this way
however
I hope you find your way too
what I meant in telling that you know what you're doing is that you know how to handle your feelings
which is difficult for some people to mangae
:)
nice to talk to you dear
welcome in here :)
thank you for everything girl..i can feel from your words that you are not living in arabic country..i am arabic too and proud..but it is the place i live in made me wonder sometimes..i can see your english languege is too good..thank you ..i like to talk with you ..i hope that i we can talk always.;)
Dance of Love
29-03-2008, 20:54
thank you for everything girl..i can feel from your words that you are not living in arabic country..i am arabic too and proud..but it is the place i live in made me wonder sometimes..i can see your english languege is too good..thank you ..i like to talk with you ..i hope that i we can talk always.
I will certainly be pleased just talking and sharing with you
talking about places ,, and how satisfied we are
one doctor told me onetime ,, that
HAPPINESS IS A MENTAL PROCESS
and that is how you philosophies it and how you think about it
making sure that we are what we THINK
رائد عبد الخالق
01-04-2008, 13:05
Very Creative
Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of may
And summer’s lease hath all too short a date
Sometimes too hot the eye of heaven shines
And often is his gold complexion dimmed
And every fair from fair sometimes declines
By chance or nature’s changing course untrimmed
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest
Nor shall death brag thou wanderest in his shade
When in eternal lines to time thou growest
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee
شمس غاربة
04-04-2008, 12:19
I will certainly be pleased just talking and sharing with you
talking about places ,, and how satisfied we are
one doctor told me onetime ,, that
HAPPINESS IS A MENTAL PROCESS
and that is how you philosophies it and how you think about it
making sure that we are what we THINK
i am really happy to talk to you ..walla you are in my heart ;)
شمس غاربة
04-04-2008, 12:22
Very Creative
;)thank you ..and i love Iraq to
شمس غاربة
04-04-2008, 12:25
Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of may
And summer’s lease hath all too short a date
Sometimes too hot the eye of heaven shines
And often is his gold complexion dimmed
And every fair from fair sometimes declines
By chance or nature’s changing course untrimmed
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest
Nor shall death brag thou wanderest in his shade
When in eternal lines to time thou growest
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee
thank you rain man ;)
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