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عرض كامل الموضوع : ~{waiting for the truth}~.....my poem!



xxsweet scarsxx
05-09-2007, 06:28
hey guys,i hope every one's doing ok:)
this poem i wrote last night,and i wanna know what do you think of it!!!!!!plz say what you trully think of it
thank you:)

*(WAITING FOR THE TRUTH}*

on my back laying by the bed side
thoughts of you
are for ever on my mind
keeping me awake in the middle of the night
I wait in silence for you
breath into me one more time
I wanna fell safe again
the signs were there all along
I was lost in my path
of loneliness and misery
out of the bepth of my heart I'm calling you
walk with me into the land of happiness and grace
you’re the only truth I know
keep me strong for me and you
to be real again like I once was

RomantiC_X
05-09-2007, 11:24
to honest .. it was greaaaaaaaaaat .. but there were some mistake .. like spiling mistake in the word (bepth) and it should be like this : (depth) ... ^__^ thanks for this wonderful words .. real wonderful ..

yours truly ... RomantiC_X

عهد
05-09-2007, 23:29
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ريماس77
06-09-2007, 00:20
اختي انا عارفه العنوان انو انتظار الحقيقه بس الباقي مو فاهمه منو شي شكلك تعرفي تكتبي عربي ممكن تكتبي القصيدة با العربي :لقافة: