njj77
21-02-2007, 20:38
this is one of my poems and i would like to know your opinion about it..... your opinions mean a lot to me......im waiting
When you keep all this love inside
To find yourself have been left behind
When you hide it for all those years
To end up with pain & tears
Thinking that love may last
While it's going so fast
Now all that is becoming a history
A word in a book as a memory
Pretending things are fine
To see that you will never be mine
Seeing you leaving for someone else
With tears I wish you happiness
It's cutting me like a knife
I can’t object it's my life
To fall in love with someone I can’t reach
Leaving me with less speech
You were here and now you are gone
I feel so hurt & i am so alone
My wings are too weak to fly
They're broken, can't even try
I try hard to spread my wings
To get rid of this maze of rings
So secured to teach them how to fly
Till the moment comes and both die
Now I’m in the middle of nowhere
Trying to find a light here or there
Trying to find my own shelter
To stay alone till I feel better
But the shock was too strong
Directing me to somewhere wrong
Is that what I really deserve
Seeing you leaving me & i observe
When you keep all this love inside
To find yourself have been left behind
When you hide it for all those years
To end up with pain & tears
Thinking that love may last
While it's going so fast
Now all that is becoming a history
A word in a book as a memory
Pretending things are fine
To see that you will never be mine
Seeing you leaving for someone else
With tears I wish you happiness
It's cutting me like a knife
I can’t object it's my life
To fall in love with someone I can’t reach
Leaving me with less speech
You were here and now you are gone
I feel so hurt & i am so alone
My wings are too weak to fly
They're broken, can't even try
I try hard to spread my wings
To get rid of this maze of rings
So secured to teach them how to fly
Till the moment comes and both die
Now I’m in the middle of nowhere
Trying to find a light here or there
Trying to find my own shelter
To stay alone till I feel better
But the shock was too strong
Directing me to somewhere wrong
Is that what I really deserve
Seeing you leaving me & i observe