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عرض كامل الموضوع : Madonna, Madonna



Sansa Stark
19-03-2014, 21:33
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

Disclaimer before I begin

This is not in anyway affiliated with the entertainer Madonna
This is purely a fictional character


Madonna, Madonna thou with a heart of gold

Kind-hearted and ever-so-sweet

Tender and ever-so-brave

Reassured and ever-so-riveting

Unwavered and ever-so-just


Madonna, Madonna thou with the auburn hair

Hair cascading down her back with ease

With her silhouette dancing underneath the moonlight

Eyes gleaming like incandescent lights

With her face always breaking into a smile


Madonna, Madonna thou need not do it

Red rivers running down her body

Trickling down to the floor

Her beautiful fake smile gone

All she ever wanted now gone

الصوت الحالم
23-03-2014, 00:16
و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله و بركاته

To say the truth, at the beginning I thought you meant Madonna,
And I was like "come on...why do we need to write about her"
:em_1f60b: so you did well by disclaiming that

The lines you described Madonna are really well written

I didn't expect that the poem would have a sad ending

There is a word that makes me confused a little
Thou
?Do you mean You or the word though

Nice work Mariah
Good luck