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عرض كامل الموضوع : Bloody Tears (رواية دموع الدم) بقلمي



Luka Crosszeria
04-08-2012, 10:52
السلام عليكم أعضاء مكسات!!
طبعاً هذا موضوعي الاول في منتدى مكسات
و للعلم انا كتبت الرواية بأسلوب اجنبي لكثرة تواصلي مع الاجانب و تعودي على عالم الغرب
و الروايه كتبت باللغه الانجليزيه لكني سأترجمها للعربيه الخليجيه
و لحد الحين انا وصلت الفصل التاسع بالكتابه
بس راح احط الفصل الأول و أشوف ردودكم أولاً و بعدين افكر اكملها ولا لأ :tongue-new:
^^ههههههه اتغشمر طبعا
و هذي معلومات عن الروايه :

أسم الروايه الحقيقي : Bloody Tears
الإسم بالعربي : دموع الدم
كاتب الروايه : Me : Liam Al-Buloushi AKA Luka Crosszeria
عدد الكابترز أو الفصول : غير معلوم، لكني كتبت تسعة فصول لحد الآن
*ملاحظه هامه جدا : الشخصيات و الأفكار لا تعبر عن أي شيء واقعي أو يعبر عن وجهة نظري للعالم، و إنما كتبت الروايه للتسليه
**جميع الحقوق محفوظه



نبدا مع الفصل الأول بعنوان : قضاء و قدر أم تخطيط سنين؟؟

"عشت حياتي وماعرفت الحب إلا مره....
وبعد هالمره تمنيت اموت...
ما أعتقدت إني بلقى خطيبتي تتزوج من ولد عمي بعد ما عرفت أنها تخوني معاه!...
و أدري أن "من يخون مره يكرر الخيانه ألف مره"....
أسمي ريك....
ريك شيبيرد....
وانا ريال عمري 23 سنه..." - ريك شيبيرد
ريك صبي مملوح....
شعره متوسط الطول و بني(طبيعي مو صبغ)...
و بشرته بيضا مثل الثلج الصافي (طبيعيه بدون كريمات)...
و بالنسبه لجسمه، ماهو معضل وايد ولا هو عود :tongue-new:...<<ما ياخذ قروث الحبيب
بهذيك الليله...
حياة ريك تغيرت تغير 180 درجه....
تابعو معاي و شوفوا شلون :



كان ريك قاعد قبل المغرب بساعتين...
كان عنده حفلة عرس (زفاف) ولد عمه من خطيبته السابقه
ما كان الريال ناوي يروح بس الله يهدي اخته اللي حنت عليه :أوو:
-دخلت سارا غرفته و اهي شايله بدلته اللي من تصميم المصمم الشهير (امبيورو ارماني)-
(على فكره نسيت اقول الحبيب ولد عايله عندها خير لووووول)
ريك : "سارا شنو هذا؟!؟!"
سارا : "هذي بدلتك، يلا قوم البسها و تعدل و تكشخ بسرعه!!"
ريك : "........"
سارا : "ريك....أدري أن إيفا جرحتك بخيانتها لك مع ولد عمنا....بس ريك...مهما كان...يظل ولدعمك....تكفى قوم عشاني!"
-ريك قام و باس(قبل) راس اخته الوحيده اللي اكبر منه بسنتين-
ريك : "خلاص أوكي...بس علشانج لأن ماحب اشوفج زعلانه!
سارا : "الله يخليك لي...تدري عاد...انت الوحيد اللي مهتم فيني من ماتت امي الله يرحمها و اختفى ابوي...و مات خطيبي بالحرب....عسى الله لا يحرمني منك"
ريك : "امين يارب....عسى الله يخليج لي يا احسن اخت بالدنيا"
-سارا دمعت عينها من كثر ماهي فاقده الحنان، و هذي كانت أول مره تحس بحنان و حب اخوها لها من فتره-
سارا : "يلا أخليك تلبس، بسرعه لا تتأخر أنا بروح قبلك"
ريك : "خلاص أوكي"
-ريك لبس بدلته و طالع نفسه بالمرايه(المرآة) و دمعته كانت بعينه، تذكر منظر خطيبته و اهي تلم و تحضن ولد عمه و تقوله انها تحبه، بس بعدين رد عدل بدلته وراح-
-بالعرس ريك استغرب يوم شاف رفيجة اخته جايه صوبه (الحبيب مو نظام يدور حريم كح كح) و طبعاً كانت لابسه النفنوف اللي طلعت فيه أحلى من العروس نفسها، بس ما عجبته ريك، كان
مهتم بالأيام اللي عرف فيها خطيبته السابقه اكثر، طبعاً هولي (رفيجة اخته) قامت تمسك ايده و تتلزق فيه مثل ما اتفقت مع اخته، بس ريك كان كل ما تقرب صوبه يوخر (يبعد)-
إيفا : "ريك تدري أنك أحلى شاب شافته عيني؟؟"
ريك بتحلطم و بنظره تحسس الواحد انه عارفه : "بلشنا تلزق.....والحين تغزل -.-"
إيفا : "شفييييك!! من صجي أنا أحبك!!"
ريك بهدوء : "شوفي، لا تقولين لي هالكلمه مره ثانيه لأني عارفج، توهمين اختي بإنج تحبيني و معجبه فيني و آخرتها من يلتفون الريايل الأغنيا حوالينج تنسين كل شي! كل همج الفلوس و بس!!
ما تعلميني فيج!! شايفج بعيني توه مع كبار الاغنيا و تتحرشين فيهم!! بس خلاص خليني اروح بحالي!!"
-ريك بعدين طلع من الحفله و ركب الليموزين وهَدا أعصابه، بس و اهو بالطريج قام يطق مطر، و كان مار على جسر، و شاف بنت آيه من الجمال (كان يحلم فيها من فتره و يشوفها بأحلامه) واقفه عالرصيف تبي احد يوصلها، ريك من كثر ما تحمس صرخ عالسايق-
ريك : "وقفففففففففففف!!!"
السايق و اهو يصفط السياره على جنب : "بس طال عمرك إحنا ما وصلنا!!"
ريك و اهو ينزل من السياره : "أدري....بس انطرني هني!!"
-نزل ريك وراح ركض حق البنت، البنت كانت بشرتها بيضا مثل الثلج، و شعرها أشقر طبيعي، و جسمها طبعاً ضعيفه، و عيونها خضر، و جميله جمال مو طبيعي، بس جمال رباني بدون أي عملية تجميل-
ريك : "لوسمحتي..."
البنت : "هل(كانت بتقول هلا بس من شافت بدلة ريك عصبت)....شتبي؟!؟!؟!"
ريك : "تبين أوصلج؟؟"
البنت : "شوف، مو علشان أنا واقفه بالشارع ابي احد يوصلني تحسبني خمة شارع ابيع نفسي علشان أي شي!!، و أدري فيكم انتو الأغنيا تسوون روحكم طيبين و ما عندكم خرابيط وانتو
مخربطين تخربط الدنيا كلها!! وحسبالكم بفلوسكم تقدرون تشترون أي شي!!"
ريك "اووووله اوووله اووووله!! كل هذا حقد علي علشان انا ولد عايله؟؟ يبا يا بنت الناس انا مابي شي منج بس أبي اساعدج!!"
البنت: ".......و شنو يأكدلي أنك ماراح تتحرش فيني؟؟"
ريك و اهو يبتسم بهدوء و بحنيه و اهو يعطيها بوكه : "اذا قربت صوبج، هذي بطاقتي داخل البوك....بلغي عني"
البنت و اهي تردله البوك : "مو كافي..."
ريك : "يا بنت الحلال انا شايف هالمطر القوي و كسرتي خاطري...قلت اوصلج و اساعدج أحسن من بدال لا اخليج ضحيه حق هالشباب الذيابه..."
البنت و اهي تطالع ريك، بعد ما تذكرت انها فامبير و تقدر تذبحه في ثواني اذا قرب صوبها : "ماشي..."
ريك : "تفضلي وياي عالليموزين..."
-ريك مشى معاها و اهو ماحط عينه بعينها، وفتح لها باب السياره-
ريك : "تفضلي..."
البنت و اهي تدخل السياره : "شكراً..."
-ريك دخل الليمو و قعد بالجهه المقابله، بعيد عنها و اهو يطالع الأرضيه-
ريك : "وبن تبين اوصلج؟؟"
البنت : "حق اقرب هوتيل..."
ريك : "إحنا نعرف بعض من قبل؟؟...."
البنت بعد ما ركزت على ريك و عرفته : "ها؟؟....ل..لا..."
ريك : "جوسيف سوق لأقرب هوتيل..."
السايق : "حاضر طال عمرك..."
ريك بعد ما شاف البنت و تذكر انها نفس البنت اللي كان بعرفها بأحلامه، اسمها البنت أليس : "انا ريك...ريك شيبرد..."
البنت : "و أنا....أل..."
-قبل لا تكمل قطعها ريك-
ريك : "أليس؟؟...."
البنت و هي خايفه : "إ....إي..."
ريك : "متأكده إن ما نعرف بعض؟؟..."
أليس : "بصراحه... مادري شلون أشرحلك...يعني...أنا أعرفك بس...من أحلامي..."
ريك : "شي غريب...لأن أنا بعد أعرفج و أعرف إسمج من أحلامي...إنزين...عندج أحد ناطرج بالهوتيل؟؟..."
أليس : "بصراحه....لأ...."
ريك : "إنزين أذا تبين يعني...تقدرين تسكنين بقصري معاي و مع أختي..."
أليس واهي تطالع عيون ريك الزرق : "إي...ليش لأ...دام أختك موجوده...إسمها سارا؟؟..."
ريك و اهو يهز راسه : "إي....من الأحلام بعد؟؟..."
أليس : "ها؟...إي...إي...من الأحلام..."
ريك و اهو يبتسم : "شي غريب بصراحه..."
ريك : "جوسيف خلاص روح البيت..."
السايق : "اللي تآمر فيه طال عمرك...."
أليس و اهي تفكر بهدوء و صمت : "بصراحه الصبي زوغه...و انتي كنتي تنطرين هاللحظه من أول مره شفتيه و كان عمره 15 سنه...أهو ما يدري إن كل شي ما كان حلم...إن كل شي كان واقع و أنا أعرفه و اهو يعرفني...كل ما كبر صار أحلى من قبل...بس أحسنلي ما أفتح الموضوع ألحين...لمن نوصل بيته أقوله...عن كل شي..."
ريك : "وين وصلتي؟؟"
أليس : "هلا؟؟...."
ريك و اهو يضحك بطريقه كيوت : "كنتي سرحانه....بس عسى ما وصلتي المريخ بالتفكير؟؟..."
أليس و اهي تبتسم لضحكة ريك اللي تحبها : "هههههههه...دمك حيل خفيف...وضحكتك عسل..."
-أليس بلعت ريجها لأن الكلام طلع لاشعوري-
-ريك وقف ضحك و قعد يطالع الطريج و اهو يفكر-
ريك و اهو يفكر بهدوء : "أهي حلوه...بس...ما دام بلشت تغزل من ألحين يعني إهي خفيفه..."
أليس : "ريك بغيت أكلمك بموضوع..."
ريك بعد ما انصدم وطالعها : "هلا....آمري؟؟..."
أليس : "بس..ما أقدر أكلمك فيه ألحين...لمن نوصل قصرك أقولك...لأن الموضوع حساس.."
ريك و أهو منصدم : "آآآ....أوكي...."
-بعد ما وصلوا القصر، ريك أمر الخدم في أنهم يهتمون في أليس و يحطونها في غرفه نظيفه، و يساعدونها في ملابسها و أغراضها، بعدين راح غرفته، تسبح و تنظف و لبس بجامته و قعد بغرفته يفكر-
-أليس بعد ما تسبحت و تنظفت إهي بعد لبست بجامتها و راحت لغرفة ريك و طقت الباب-
أليس و إهي تطق الباب : "ريك؟؟..."
ريك : "هلا!!...تفضلي!!..."
-دخلت أليس غرفة ريك و راحت قعدت يمه على فراشه-
أليس : "ريك...إحنا...إحنا نعرف بعض....بس مو من الأحلام....أنا آسفه إني جذبت عليك...و ما قلت لك الصج....بس...خفت اقولك جدام السايق و يستغرب...ريك أنا أعرف من أنت عمرك 15 سنه...كنت أداريك و أراقبك...لأنك تشبه خطيبي السابق اللي مات...جووي...بس...انت أحلى منه...و....مع الوقت....حبيتك...عرفتك وحفظتك...و اليوم...اللي صار...ما كان صدفه...انا كنت مخططه....علشان أكلمك و أقولك عن كل شي...أدري انك مو انسان عادي...و إنك نص بشري و نص وحش..."
ريك و علامات الصدمه مبينه بويهه : "أليس..."
أليس و اهي تبجي و تقرب من ريك و ترجف : "أنا آسفه...والله ماكان قصدي أسوي فيك جذي...بس..."
ريك و اهو يحضنها : "بس ولا شي...خلج بين إيدي....لا تتركيني نفس كل مره و تختفين و تتابعيني من بعيد لبعيد...خلج معاي..."
-و الدموع تنزل من عينه-
أليس و اهي تبجي و تلم ريك و تدعس ويها بصدره : "ماراح أخليك...ريك إنت كل دنيتي...ما أقدر أتحمل لحظه ثانيه تفرقني عنك..."
-و بالزوايا المظلمه بالغرفه...بدت أليس تشوف وحوش ريك....و اهو ظامها حييل على صدره، ما يبي يتركها...و كل ما تنفست أليس نفس من عطره...زاد عطشها لدمه...لحد ما استولت غريزة الفامبير فيها عليها و عضت ريك برقتبه...ودخلت أنيابها الحاده...إللي أحد من السكين داخل لحمه...و بدت تشرب من دمه...و حست فيه و اهو يحظنها اقوى..كأنه يقولها "خلصيني من هالدنيا"...و ردت أليس لوعيها و سحبت بعيد عن رقبته و بجت أكثر...لحد ما غشت...و ريك شالها و حطها على فراشه...و نام يمها و اهو يحظنها...و بعد ساعتين، قامت أليس و خافت أنها كانت تحلم بريك، بس لمن حست بذراعه حوالينها رجعت نامت-

يتبع

مجنونةالشوكولات
04-08-2012, 14:43
الرواية بدايتها حلوة بس
مو مرتبة وكلام داخل على بعض
لازم تسوين فواصل وترتبي افكارك

Luka Crosszeria
07-08-2012, 00:48
الرواية بدايتها حلوة بس
مو مرتبة وكلام داخل على بعض
لازم تسوين فواصل وترتبي افكارك

هلا اختي مجنونة الشوكولاته
اشكرج على مرورج نورتي الموضوع بصراحه
و بالنسبه لـ الروايه :
المشكله ان الروايه باللغه الانجليزيه و أنا قعدت اترجمها للعربي، و كل ما ترجمت جزء منها نسيت جزئيه ثانيه :offended:
على فكره انا خلطت الفصل الأول بالثاني:mask:
يلا ما عليه :beguiled: انشالله احط الفصل الثالث بـ اللغه الانجليزيه
و انشالله يعجبج

Luka Crosszeria
08-08-2012, 04:35
Back!!

طبعاً مثل ما ذكرت سابقاً الروايه سيتم اكمالها باللغه الإنجليزيه لصعوبة الترجمه علي
و نرجع للفصل الثالث:

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BRB!! XD

Luka Crosszeria
08-08-2012, 12:13
باكوو، تم أعادة كتابة الروايه باللغه الإنجليزيه، و راح ارفعها من اول فصل مره ثانيه و شوفو الفرق بأنفسكم :


"my name is Rick...Rick Shane Shephered...& I never knew love...but one time...& I got cheated on in that time...
I never thought that my fiancé would love my cousin...
Would cheat on me with him...
& I have this feeling... That everything's about to change...

{chapter One : It Was Meant to be}
There was this rich guy called Rick, & he was on his way to his cousin's wedding, who was about to merry his ex, Rick at first didn't wanna go, but he went there for his sister, Cause he found out that she was cheating on him with his cousin, but Rick went to the wedding & acted normally While his sis set things up so his "date" on the wedding would be her beautiful friend, While she actually had a crush on Rick, Rick had a medium length brown hair with blue eyes & very light skin Not forgetting that he had an athletic body He was too broken to continue the date, so after the marriage is done & went home, but while in his way, it started raining, & while he was riding on the bridge with his limo & his driver, he noticed a girl standing, In this heavy rain all alone looking for a ride to a hotel, So Rick asked his driver to stop, Then he went & talked to the girl, So when he got close to her she screamt "I'M NOT GONNA SELL MYSELF FOR THE LIKES OF YOU", & he was like "calm down!! I'm just going to help you I swear!!" Then the girl looked at him with her green eyes She saw he's honest & she remembered that she's a vampire & could kill him in any second 
if he tried to touch her so she accepted, Then she got with him in the limo while Rick Carried her bags, She got in & Rick sat away from her then asked while he was staring at the road "where to??" The girl said "to the nearest hotel, please" so the driver started to drive, Rick didn't say a word halfway but then he looked at the girl then asked her "what's your name??", The girl said "Alice", Rick nod his head gently & said "I'm rick, Rick Shephered", Alice had her eyes wide open staring at Rick, while saying "THE Rick Shephered?!?!", Then he looked at her & frowned & said "I thought you didn't care about companies & shit like that, girls usually don't", Then alice said "well, I do have a lot of free time & see tv so..."
Rick laughed & said "don't you work somewhere" 
Then Alice said "i used to be a slave for my boss & I'm running away from him" 
Rick looked at alice & said "seriously, a SLAVE?!?!"
Then alice swallowed & said "yes....a slave..." Then alice looked at Rick saying "can I borrow some money from you??..."
Then Rick looked at her & said "you don't have enough money to live in NYC's apartments??"
Then alice was like " well...I just didn't think that far ahead..."
Rick looked at her & said "you know, you could use one of the rooms in my palace, there's lots of them & I'll give you keys to the outter door if you want to"
Alice looked at Rick & smiled & said "you're really kind...how can you trust me??"
Rick said "I'm just following my instinct"
Then alice started flirting with Rick, but rick got bothered from that so he just looked away Then when they got to the palace, Rick gave a copy of the keys to every door in the palace to Alice, Then he asked his maids to help Alice get cleaned up, & they did.

{chapter Two : love crawling}
Rick went to sleep right after changing his clothes that night But Alice felt something weird when she got close to him, a sudden weird thirst for blood, a smell she couldn't resist So when Rick slept alice sneaked into his room & stared at him & thought "god, he looks just like Joey!!! Could he be him??...." When she got close to his bed She realized he was crying through the night Then her mind started to play tricks on her Pictured Rick as her dead fiancé Joey So she got close enough to kiss him But Rick woke up & pushed her away Then felt a rage of anger When she fell to the floor she said "Joey!! What's wrong?!?! It's ME!! ALICE!!!" She felt demons crawling in the darkness getting closer to Rick as his rage kept on increasing So she ran to him then held him tight then kissed him Then she heard scary screams but she kept on kissing Rick deeply Rick kissed her back, without opening his eyes, just like if he was enjoying it But the deeper they kissed, the louder the screams get, so Rick cuddled alice close to him & kept on kissing her From the fear she felt, she held onto Rick & kissed him more, she was about to cry So after a while all the screams faded away 
& the illusions Alice had about being Rick Joey stopped Then all of a sudden Alice pinned Rick to the wall & bit his neck, digging her fangs into his neck Rick got hurt but he couldn't scream for some reason then while alice was sucking his blood, she felt something strange, something she felt for the first time ever She felt RICK pushing her to drink more So she stood there shocked, wondering "is he trying to....kill himself?!?!...." Then she stopped & looked into Rick's eyes & got lost into his eyes while Rick got hypnotized by the beauty of her eyes then Alice licked the blood off Rick's neck then his wounds suddenly healed It wasn't from alice But it was from Rick himself Then with her bloody lips she kissed Rick & started to make out with him So they leaned their foreheads over eachothers foreheads & Alice putted her hands on Rick's cheeks saying "you're not Joey....but you're just like him...." so then Rick looked at her & said "& you're not Elena....but you're better than her...", then Alice asked Rick to spend the night sleeping next to him Then Rick said "not just tonight....but every night..."
So they cuddled & slept together on the same bed In the dawn.

{Chapter Three: Memories Relived}
Alice suddenly woke up afraid, then she felt Rick waking up behind her & then she laid her head on his chest, right over his skin, her ear over his heart, listening to his heartbeat & felt calm as she was listening to it, Rick kissed her shoulder & head then putted his arm around her holding her to him, then Alice kissed his chest & got closer to his face & rubbed the tip of her nose on his cheeks & along his jaw & face, then rubbed her lips to his as a sign of telling him to kiss her So then Rick kissed her gently, as she kissed him back, enjoying the taste of his lips & the warmth of his skin, then Alice stopped him & rubbed her hand on his chest & asked him "I know that you're a "hard to get" kind of a guy, so why did you gave me a shot??..."
Rick Answered "Because Theres Something Different About you...."
Then they cuddled again, & kissed until they both fell asleep
So after about 5 hours His sister came into his room & she said "Rick you gotta wake up you're late for...."then she saw him shirtless with his lips touching Alice's lips & said "OOOOOH MY GOD!!!!!!! YOU'LL BE KILLED!!!!" Then both alice & Rick woke up  & Rick said "wait you're getting it wrong!!" Then Alice looked at Rick afraid that he'd deny knowing her Then Rick looked at his sister & said "Sarah...this is my girlfriend...Alice..." Then Alice looked at Rick & cuddled closer to him When Sarah (Rick's sister) saw she's wearing her clothes She apologized & said "sorry for thinking that you're a whore from the nearest club" Alice felt like crying when Sarah made it clear that she doesn't want her to be around Rick So then Rick realized what she meant & held her shirt saying "don't You EVER dare to talk to her like that again...." So then Sarah kissed her brother's forehead & said "did you bang with her?!?!" & laughed, while Alice blushed & said "he didn't but...he will" then Sarah slapped rick
Rick looked at his sis shocked then Alice jumped on him & said "maybe now??"
Rick looked at her & said "n...no...."
Alice stared at him shocked & said "so, you're not going to "bang" tonight?!?!"
Rick looked at Alice & said "no...not until I gain enough trust in you...." & he was serious then Both Alice & Sarah yelled "WHAT?!?!" Then Sarah said "SO SHE IS A WH**E YOU MET LAST NIGHT?!?!" Then tears started swelling from Alice's eyes while Rick looked at Sarah & said "there..." then screamt "WOULD YOUR F*****G FRIEND BE HAPPY NOW?!?!?!" Then Sarah shutted up, & looked at Rick & tried to say "but Rick I..." he didn't let her complete her sentence which was "but Rick I know Holly Unlike Alice...." Then Rick screamt "YOUR F*****G FRIEND WAS FLIRTING WITH EVERY GUY IN THE WEDDING LAST NIGHT!! SHE'S A F*****G MONEY-WHORE!!!!" Then Alice Held onto rick tight crying & remembering how Joey used to beat her When he got angry, that's why even though she's a vampire she's weak next to rick, cause she feared Joey but loved him a lot at the same time 
Then Rick held her & said "a...Alice" then sarah stood there & felt that Alice is a good girl, while she was crying & telling Rick to stop just like if she were a little girl afraid, Then Rick held her to him & sang her a song until she fell asleep on his chest, then kissed his sister's forehead & apologized, then Sarah said "Rick....it's okay I didn't knew about Holly...so...." 
Then Rick answered "but I shouldn't have screamt..."
Sarah looked at Rick & said "did she see "them"??...." 
Then Rick nod his head & said "yeah...she drank a little of my blood so..."
Sarah interrupted him "she's a vampire...??" 
Rick nod his head in silence then Sarah looked at Alice & said in a low voice to Rick "did she know about being us the children of a king demon who's married to a human Being??...."
Rick Looked Back & said "No...."
Then again Sarah looked at Rick & said "you know I can feel people's feelings, right??...." Then Rick said "yeah, why??"
Then Sarah replied "I couldn't feel her, I knew she wasn't human...but when she's close to you I can feel that she loves you a lot" Then Rick said "it's weird...I kept dreaming of her until I actually met her...that's what..."
Sarah completed with him
"made you tell the driver to stop the car...." while The truth is Rick wasn't dreaming of her, Their meeting wasn't a coincidence, It was all planned, Alice have been following him since he got 15, & He's now 23, when she followed Rick it was cause She just remembered her days with Joey when they were young when he reached 15, Joey looked exactly like Rick But he had blonde hair.

{Chapter Four : Showing Some Love}
then Rick went to take a shower & went to wear his suit meanwhile His sister got out & waited in the limo Then Alice woke up while Rick was about to do his tie Then she said "may I tie your tie for you??" & Rick looked at her & then Rick smiled as she came towards him & tied his tie, then she looked at him with her eyes begging him to stay, asking "do you really have to go today??...." Then Rick looked at her & smiled then kissed her gently while saying "do you want me to stay??" then Alice nod her head & played with Rick's hair
Rick then smiled & looked at Alice & moved her hair away from her face & putted his hand on her cheek then said "I'll stay, then...I've been dreaming of you all of my life" Then Alice said "those weren't dreams.... The times you've talked to me....the times you've kissed me...the times you've saw me....I've been with you all along...since you were 15...." Then Rick blushed & said while he was shocked "even the time that we danced...while I was drunk...."
Alice giggled & blushed while kissing Rick's cheek & said "Mmhm"
Then Rick called his sis & told her he wouldn't go to work then he cuddled with Alice, then alice asked him to go out somewhere & they did, however after they were done, they watched tv & fell asleep then after a few hours They woke up & sat on bed & cuddled while talking.
Hours passed by, until it reached sunset, Rick & Alice were still cuddled, they both took showers & got cleaned up, then when it reached sunset, Alice got shocked & looked at the sun, then remembered she spent A WHOLE day without being in shadows of darkest corners, Rick smiled & moved her hair away from her face & looked at her eyes turning into gray with sunlight, then kissed her hand & said "you know, your eyes are the most amazing eyes I have ever seen..."
Then she looked at Rick & Putted her hand on his cheek & said "how the hell did I not turn to dust??....it must be your blood...Rick be honest with me...are you really a human??..."
Rick looked down then looked at Alice "since we know each others from what I thought were dreams...& you know me for a long while...I think I should tell you the truth...I'm only HALF...human..." Alice stood there shocked & looked at Rick saying "what do you mean??...."
Rick looked at her & said "I'm half demon...& half human...."
Alice looked at Rick & said
"& these demons I saw last night...??...."
Then he got closer to her & whispered in her ear
"not just a normal half demon....but a prince half demon..."
Alice looked into his eyes & said "h-how so??...."
Then Rick kissed her head & said
"I have the look of a human... But the powers of a demon....also....wings....devilish...ones...." Then alice asked Rick to show her his wings, & he did, they were so black like a moonless & starless night, with leather just like bats's leather.
Then alice looked at him & kissed him then she cutted a small wound on her neck & told Rick to drink, Rick strongly refused it, but Alice kept begging him, & he kept refusing until she held a stick of wood to her heart & asked to Rick to drink one last time, then Rick drank from her, but he was careful when he got closer to her, & she threw away the stick & pulled his hand to her heart, she couldn't help keeping her laughter in, so she let it out

(To Be Continued)